Somewhere else else

October 17, 2010

Say ‘naf’, yes you, say it out loud:
Naf naf naf naf naf naf…
See, that meant
‘I love you’
In a world where somebody
Me
Was somewhere else
Here
Somebody else
Her
Was dying
Somewhere else else
There
And I still got the gift
Of holding her
Hand
At the exact moment
She passed
Oh boy,
one boy really does
get
Everything

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4 Responses to “Somewhere else else”

  1. Wow! what else can I say!
    Stunning 🙂

    Glad I found your place

    cheers

  2. Claudia said

    wonder if this really is about dying..?
    the language sounds so playful – like children playing word games..but either way..fantastic write!

  3. forpuck said

    Thanks Claudia. For me it’s about death. Maybe there’s play in that too though.

  4. thinkingtoohard13 said

    “one boy really does
    get
    Everything”

    Indeed. Gorgeous, truly.

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