The secret body

September 3, 2010

The secret body
Asleep below sheets
Of cotton with low thread count
Room smells of
Cigarettes and fucking
Words were said
Breaking ideologies
Into pieces of flesh
His his his his
Hers

Whenever you call
These lovers do not
Pick up the phone
Or buzz you in
From the street

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4 Responses to “The secret body”

  1. mairmusic said

    Woah– such a strong and vital image. The line “Of cotton with low thread count” was such a clever way to locate your scene– nicely done!
    http://mairmusic.wordpress.com/

  2. forpuck said

    Thank you very much, I’m happy that you liked it.

  3. brian said

    ha. his x4 hers x1 hmmm….

  4. Claudia said

    ha – and why should they pick up the phone..? i wouldn’t either..smiles.. love the ..cotton with low thread count…and …Breaking ideologies Into pieces of flesh..and you see…the men are always in advantage..

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