Comments for Forpuck - by AG http://forpuck.wordpress.com Don't shout, you'll wake Fri, 24 May 2013 20:30:08 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.com/ Comment on Passing lights by yi-ching lin http://forpuck.wordpress.com/2012/04/03/passing-lights/#comment-977 Fri, 24 May 2013 20:30:08 +0000 https://forpuck.wordpress.com/?p=665#comment-977 ashtray-blackandwhitebreast-
cigarettegirlgreen is the title
of an album lost somewhere
along Interstate 40
when we were running
away from the rest of our
lives. you pulled it from
the trunk of that old Rabbit
which we knew would never
make it any further than
Nashville, but surprised
us instead, rolling into
Albuquerque. i can’t really
say if we escaped in the
end, but being here with
you, with those confident
chords kicking in, traps
me all over again
.
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]]> Comment on Passing lights by Beth Winter http://forpuck.wordpress.com/2012/04/03/passing-lights/#comment-976 Fri, 10 May 2013 00:28:24 +0000 https://forpuck.wordpress.com/?p=665#comment-976 Every once in a while, I read a poem that is so good that I cannot comment except to say thank you. This is one of those times. I saw those embers. Wonderful.

]]> Comment on Passing lights by claudia http://forpuck.wordpress.com/2012/04/03/passing-lights/#comment-974 Tue, 08 Jan 2013 18:04:26 +0000 https://forpuck.wordpress.com/?p=665#comment-974 happy new year anton…

]]> Comment on Passing lights by claudia http://forpuck.wordpress.com/2012/04/03/passing-lights/#comment-973 Mon, 26 Nov 2012 17:26:45 +0000 https://forpuck.wordpress.com/?p=665#comment-973 hey…just wanted to say hi…missing your poetry…

]]> Comment on Passing lights by forpuck http://forpuck.wordpress.com/2012/04/03/passing-lights/#comment-964 Wed, 04 Apr 2012 09:36:33 +0000 https://forpuck.wordpress.com/?p=665#comment-964 Thanks for the comments everyone.

Claudia, I am back, just haven’t written anything in a while.

Gay, how is everything going with you?

]]> Comment on Passing lights by Semaphore http://forpuck.wordpress.com/2012/04/03/passing-lights/#comment-963 Wed, 04 Apr 2012 03:23:48 +0000 https://forpuck.wordpress.com/?p=665#comment-963 Life is a highway – and that metaphor pervades this poem so powerfully, in so many of its well-crafted tableaux – “diners go by like missed opportunities every other hour”. A pleasure to read.

]]> Comment on Passing lights by Gay Reiser Cannon http://forpuck.wordpress.com/2012/04/03/passing-lights/#comment-962 Wed, 04 Apr 2012 01:53:47 +0000 https://forpuck.wordpress.com/?p=665#comment-962 Missed you Anton.
I know that road trip sans gps – wouldn’t use one if I had it.(who programs them, anyway?). Just got a new car. It’ll be fun to see how it diffiers from others.

I like that you handed the driving over to “her” as you gaze at the opportunities missed. Ha. I always think men feel that way as passenger. Great write.

Stay well, my friend!

]]> Comment on Passing lights by Victoria C. Slotto http://forpuck.wordpress.com/2012/04/03/passing-lights/#comment-961 Wed, 04 Apr 2012 00:21:13 +0000 https://forpuck.wordpress.com/?p=665#comment-961 “tens of life metaphors a mile…” this made me home in on the marvelous metaphorical quality of this poem. There is something magical about traveling in the night.

]]> Comment on Passing lights by skyraftwanderer http://forpuck.wordpress.com/2012/04/03/passing-lights/#comment-960 Tue, 03 Apr 2012 22:22:10 +0000 https://forpuck.wordpress.com/?p=665#comment-960 Really like the mix of speech and poetry. Works so well.

Great imagery as well. Easy to visualize the whole thing.

Nice write here.

]]> Comment on Passing lights by brian miller http://forpuck.wordpress.com/2012/04/03/passing-lights/#comment-959 Tue, 03 Apr 2012 21:32:42 +0000 https://forpuck.wordpress.com/?p=665#comment-959 ha nice one anton…i like the bug splattered windows & life metaphors correcting the way we think….listening as well for those voices in the sky…

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