Sometimes Tuesdays make sense
January 27, 2012
She comes from nowhere
just appears;
a stranger of cups
suddenly dealt upside down
from a deck
you know is marked by the divine
and so
when you shake hands
another wind god wakes
and starts licking the dice
and so
you order wine
because what more is there to do
when she’s on every chip
you’re playing for
with trembling hands
and earmarked credit cards
i like the wind gods licking the dice and the earmarked credit cards..nice.. sitting here with a nice glass of sicilian merlot and enjoying some fine A. poetry..smiles
I love love the three line stanza in the middle!
really really like this
Thanks guys!
I feel it falls apart on line 4 and never recovers. ‘Suddenly’ is a terrible word.
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